Hello everyone, I would LOVE some feedback on my rough blurb for The Witch's Heart, please, please, please. Thanks. xxx
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Ella couldn’t deny Marcus anything. Was it the same for him?
Secluded away in a mansion on the beautiful coast of Maine, pregnant, soul-shifter, Ella, should be happy. Instead, knowing her enemies, the sinister Professor and the nefarious Elusti remain, she’s tormented with dread for the future of her unborn child.
Stubborn ex-navy SEAL Marcus refuses to forgo his mission with the security team Orion even after his emotional wife dreams him dead. Determined to keep her safe, he asks her to remain at the high-tech fortress to take care of their baby.
However, you cannot outrun destiny because it lurks in the darkness waiting. When Ella’s worst fears materialize they are torn apart and shattered by loss and guilt. Each blames the other putting their love to the ultimate test.
How much are you willing to sacrifice for the one you love? 143
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